Deanna's World

Hey everyone first lets start off by taking a moment to remember those who have recently passed away and ask God to send the family and friends strength, love and peace. From time to time I find inspiration come to me to write on many emotions, some not even my own. So I like to see where you, the reader see things going in my writing. As if you read my poetry line by line and foreshadow the ending. I would love to know where you see the poem below going so here it is. The start of a poem.... Tell me which way it should go and/or what you think it could turn into... A firm grip I need to keep or God knows I'll fall fast. All in a moments time I see my life fly past. I hold on to this breath inside as it seems to hurt so good. The pleasure and pain inside is so misunderstood. ©Deanna M Julbe 4/2014 PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK to my email deanna.julbe@gmail.com or comment in my blog comments I will continue with alternate endings depending on the way you see this poem developing

Hey everyone first lets start off by taking a moment to remember those who have recently passed away and ask God to send the family and friends strength, love and peace. Thank you for staying with me... I apologize I have been out of touch with my blog, but for good reason. In January I had slacked a bit with my blogging  but then was going through a bit of a rough patch with my health (Long story short...had a miscarriage) and kind of lost track of blogging whatsoever. But in recent weeks I have found a deeper connection with myself spiritually and I can't help but try to find optimism waiting around each corner of my life. I know everything happens for a reason and I am determined to find what God has in store for me! I would like to invite you all to my Facebook page www.facebook.com/speakyourheartpoetry please check it out and give me a LIKE! This is a page I post to almost daily and try to share inspiration. I invite you all to write to me, share your poetry, inspire and sprea